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nia shah's avatar

this is so beautiful oh my lord 💗💗

there’s so many parts that hit different but i think ‘audition for love’ takes the cake.

is it selfish to say i want to read more like this from you?

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kriti sachan's avatar

no because i have around 28 drafts that have this same energy, i just don’t wanna come across as a yearner and a loser hahahahaha.

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nia shah's avatar

girl, to quote you:

fake idgafer! i caught your yearning between the lines.

we love your work — keep it coming.

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kriti sachan's avatar

hahahaha😭

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Mansi Katiyar's avatar

Even if there are 10028 drafts, i would read them all...this comforted me in the ways i couldn't even describe....🫂🤧

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Pearl's avatar

Shedding the layers of pretending to unveil the hidden child. We keep going until the layers feel like the heaviest of all. Love your blogs btw!

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roseple purlue's avatar

This is so good OMG💗💗

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Madhusmita Beura's avatar

While I was reading it, I felt like I'm hearing myself speak everything I've been holding within; comprehending yet scared to compose it. Thank you for saying it loud ❤️

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hannah's avatar

This is beautifully written!

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kriti sachan's avatar

thank you🥺

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December's avatar

You’ve put into words what I’ve felt for so long. It’s not unrequited love that breaks you — it’s manufactured love. The kind that feels rehearsed, not real. I’ve seen it, lived it, and your writing brought every bit of that feeling back.Your writing hits home.I love it.💗

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SeaGlass Letters's avatar

"Because keeping someone around is easier than keeping them happy." beautifully said xx

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Oatmilk Allison's avatar

"When I was a child, the world never made me doubt myself. I could say “I love this!” and mean it. I could dream loudly. Cry openly. Want things without guilt. " Such a good description of childhood innocence. Wish we didn't lose so much of it over the years, and just love more willingly.

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Divya's avatar

This is so beautifully written. I am going through something similar and i needed this!!! I love your work with all my heart 💙🌻✨

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Rihan Ali's avatar

this reminded me of my 13 year self which somehow faded away in a couple of years and i didn't even question that why am i even supposed to accept this cruelty.

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𝐀𝐍𝐆𝐄𝐋𝐈𝐂𝐀 𝐑𝐎𝐒𝐄's avatar

“keeping someone around is easier than keeping them happy” 😭😭😭😭

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Aliza's avatar

AHHHH!!!! 🥹✨ it's so so beautifully written 🤍🥹

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Aarushi's avatar

I have not read sucha a good expressive literary and that too with indescribable feeling, it's not about heartbreak or love that failed but love that was just half way in maybe? I felt so at peace by reading, it made me realise that I was not at the fault somehow ifykyk. 💌

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wallflowerjournals's avatar

absolutely incredible, you truly are talented!! 💕💕

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TheSky's avatar

I found myself in certain parts of this ethereal and raw piece, i even thought that " love is something that chooses us but i am wrong, i learned this very lately", i guess its never late❤️

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with.love.arẹwà❤️'s avatar

This is so beautiful and it really mirrored me

It really did,it feels good knowing that I am not alone and I am not weird

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