this is so good i could cry. the melancholic numbness and the yearning but also resignation and exhaustion. not the kind you sleep of by the kind where you feel it in your bones for just existing. for just feeling. i would love the next chapter of this :)))
The whole thing is so beautifully written but some of the lines are just outstanding. Simple yet deep, the line about an undecided sky and the girl thinking I know what it feels like and the log into the notebook just stay with you. The nuances are subtle,mundane yet relatable. Ofcourse we want to read chapter 2 and more.
The way you write is so goddamn beautiful I can't.
Wow kriti, SHE KNOWS WANTING IS NOT SAME AS DESERVING ✨😭, I felt it, I felt everyword. It was so beautiful. Thankyou and please share the part 2
this is so good i could cry. the melancholic numbness and the yearning but also resignation and exhaustion. not the kind you sleep of by the kind where you feel it in your bones for just existing. for just feeling. i would love the next chapter of this :)))
It's so lyrical. Waiting for the next chapter! 🌟
The whole thing is so beautifully written but some of the lines are just outstanding. Simple yet deep, the line about an undecided sky and the girl thinking I know what it feels like and the log into the notebook just stay with you. The nuances are subtle,mundane yet relatable. Ofcourse we want to read chapter 2 and more.
Uff 💛
Very very poetic
And relatable to a tiresome degree.
Absolutely love your essence slipped in it so craftfully, so ,
Chapter 2?
Emotional damage. Just stunning.
It's like reading the lyrics of a Tom Odell song.
I love this🥹
We definitely want a chapter 2
of course we want chapter 2 kriti
The title is so apt. and metaphorically relatable. Seems like this is going to be a series, and honestly, can't wait for more words to pour.
Wow just wow it's the wiring is poetic and it pulled me in so easily I didn't realize when I came to the end. Wait8ng for the next chapter already
i neeeeed chapter 2 🥺
chapter 2 asap😭